Thursday, December 4, 2008

imitation

there seems no question but that the camera is on the way out. nowadays more and more cell phones require a photo taking function which put camera is a bad position. in the future, what people pursue will be convenience, if we are able to take picture from a cell phone, then why bother to buy another camera. also, cell phones have combine a mp3 function, which might have eliminate the mp3 market as well. because it is always more convenient to have everything in one body.

1 comment:

Ms. Lindsay said...

Angela, this is a good idea. Why don't you use capital letters? Also, your last sentence is a fragment, and you have no concluding sentence. You could also include more examples